We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we cannot trust the journalist. What do you think? What qualities should a journalist have?
学生原文：
In recent years, the print andelectronic media have become the major source of information. However, somepeople have doubts on the credibility of the information covered by the printand electronic media. This essay aims to represent my view on the trustworthyof news and what kinds of qualities a journalist should have.
It istrue that in order to boost newspaper circulation and TV show ratings, somenews are exaggerated and fraud to some extent. Critical thinking should betaken into consideration. That is to say, we should not blindly trust the eventcovered by the news. The doubts from readers and audiences certainly havesomething to do with the quality of journalists.
Themost significant caliber for journalists, in my opinion, is the honesty. Nomatter what happened the journalists should place their objective descriptionsand introductions of the event without any modification and exaggeration. Theyshould show their respect to the audience and the credibility of the news. Inaddition, to be journalist should be professional in their areas and have aunique insight. The quality and in-depth insight should be encouraged to be thekey point to attract the readers and audiences.
In conclusion, I personally believed that news we obtained should be treated critically with enough consideration. The qualification the journalists should have are the honesty and professional skills. On top of that, the government should tighten the regulations on the censorship of the news and the certification of the journalists.
小站教育老师批改后：
In recent years, the print andelectronic media have become the major source of information.【背景介绍】 However, somepeople have doubts on the credibility of the information covered by the printand electronic media. 【改写题目】This essay aims to represent my view on the trustworthyof news and what kinds of qualities a journalist should have.【自己的观点】
第一段写的非常好，严格按照背景介绍——改写题目——自己的观点 这个层次去写，内容很充实。
It istrue that in order to boost newspaper circulation and TV show ratings, somenews are exaggerated and fraud to some extent. Critical thinking should betaken into consideration. That is to say, we should not blindly trust the eventcovered by the news. 【这个内容放在这里没有必要)这边应该去重点阐释记者报道虚假信息的原因和危害，进而引出你下面的讨论】The doubts from readers and audiences certainly havesomething to do with the quality of journalists.
【1】Themost significant caliber for journalists, in my opinion, is the 【去掉】honesty. Nomatter what happened the journalists should place their objective descriptionsand introductions of the event without any modification and exaggeration. Theyshould show their respect to the audience and the credibility of the news.【2】 Inaddition, to be journalist should be professional in their areas and have aunique insight. The quality and in-depth insight should be encouraged to be thekey point to attract the readers and audiences. 【可以把这两个内容分开来，两段详细阐释，比较好,更有说服力】
In conclusion, I personally believed that news we obtained should be treated critically with enough consideration. The qualification the journalists should have are the honesty and professional skills. On top of that, the government should tighten the regulations on the censorship of the news and the certification of the journalists.【上文没有出现被讨论的东西，最后一段不要出现，最后一段做好总结就好】
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