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托福写作范文思路拓展:远走他乡赚钱还是陪伴家人

托福写作备考过程中,对于托福写作题目不仅仅是到手就开始写。我们必须学会对于这些题目的深入分析和内容拓展。那么,在以下内容中我们就为大家带来一些内容,为大家详细剖析如何全面练习好一个托福写作题目。

【工作类 + 两选类】

Some people like to live away from family and friends with high salaries, the other people like to stay with your family and friends with less pay. Which one do you prefer? 远走他乡赚取高薪还是享受亲朋的陪伴赚取低薪? (2012年7月28日)

【点评】托福写作的话题一般和年轻人的成长,择业,人生选择息息相关,因为年轻人会有感而发。在托福写作题库中和就业相关的话题有:三天工作好还是五天工作好;远走他乡还是久居故土;间隔年;高薪假期多的工作对比低薪假期少的工作;年轻人是否应该为做好成长的准备而从事兼职等。

【相关题目】

A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time. 是否同意低薪假期多的工作比高薪假期少的工作好? (2009年2月27日)

【题目解析】对比类写法

【作家立场】远走他乡赚取高薪是比享受亲朋的陪伴赚取低薪更好的选择。

【写作思路】一边倒支持:三个论据支持一个作家立场。

【思路拓展】

1. 工作是生活的重要部分,因此也是幸福的源泉,很多人将自己的职业成就感和薪水的高低联系到一起。薪水高意味企业重视自己,也体现了自我的价值,因此,获得职业成就感和自豪感的机会就多, 这就是为何很多年轻人愿意异乡拼搏以赚取高薪。

2. 远走他乡,尽管亲情和友情也许会疏远,但是,高薪可以给在未来给家人带来更加幸福的生活。具体而言,改善居住环境,使子女接受精英教育,家人的医疗有保障等,这些也是幸福的源泉。

3. 选择在异国他乡工作,人们也可以和亲人朋友通过网络或电话保持联系,同时,人们可以在假期的时候回家探亲,因此,家庭关系和朋友关系不一定会因为空间的隔离而疏远。

点评:推荐展开自己的例证;朋友的例证。

【原创语料库】

1. One of the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom and flexibility in selecting their favorite jobs. 现代择业方式的重要特征之一就是人们在选择自己喜欢的事业方面更加自由,灵活。

解析:one of the traits of …… is that …… 的最重要的特征之一就是 ……

2. It often happens that modern people often fall into a dilemma when faced with the option of living away from home to strive for a handsomely paid job or enjoying the company of the family with a meager salary. 现代人常常陷入两难的困境,是选择在远离家人赚取高薪,还是享受家人陪伴而赚取低薪。

解析:It often happens that modern people often fall into a dilemma when faced with the option of A and B 现代人在面临 …… 和 …… 的选择的时候,常常陷入两难的困境。

拓展:a handsomely paid job = a well-paid job n 高薪的工作

3. When it comes to the issue whether or not living far away from home to pursue wealth dreams is superior to staying with family to enjoy life, there never lacks debates and arguments. 当提及到是否远离家庭去追求财富梦想优越于和亲人们在一起享受生活的时候,人们常常争议不断。

解析:When it comes to the issue whether or not …… is superior to …… , there never lacks debates and arguments. 当提及到是否…… 优越于…… 的时候,人们争议不断。

4. A great many people prefer to secure a well-paying job even at the expense of being away from family members and friends . 很多人喜欢高薪的工作,即使这种选择是以远离亲人朋友为代价。

解析:even at the expense of …… 即使以……为代价

解析:secure a well-paying job v 找到一份高薪的工作

拓展:get a reasonable career v 找到理想的事业

5. Making large sums of money could, to large extent, improve one’s quality of life. 挣到很多的钱可以提高生活的质量。

解析:large sums of money n大笔的钱

6. Children have the opportunities of receiving fine education with high quality 孩子们有机会接受高质量的精英教育。

7. To take a few days off in luxurious seaside resorts when vacation comes 假期来临,在海边的奢华度假胜地享受生活

解析:细节展开

8. A lot of people take their comfortable salary as a source of happiness and the realization of self-value. 很多人把高薪当成是幸福的一种源泉以及自我价值的实现。

解析:comfortable adj 舒服的;富裕的

9. One might have more chances to accompany their families and associate with good friends if he or she dwell in the native hometown. 如果一个人住在家乡,他会有更多的机会陪伴家人以及和好友交往。

解析:associate with sb v 和某人交往

拓展:dwell in sp = reside in sp v 住在某地

10. A well-paid career indicates high social status,which could earn respect from others. Some top stars or financially richer entrepreneurs could serve as perfect examples. 高薪工作意味社会地位高,也赢得他人的尊敬,明星和企业家就是很好的例证。

解析:financially richer entrepreneurs n 富有的企业家

解析:could serve as perfect examples v可以作为完美的例证

11. A desirable life is what every individual aspires after. 人人渴望自己想要的生活。

点评:…… is what every individual aspires after v ……是人人渴望的。

12. It is highly possible that one could keep contact with relatives and friends via the Internet and the mobile phone even he or she live in the remote city or alien land. In this sense, harmonious family relationship will not be undermined and intimate friendship will not be estranged even there exists the geographical barrier. 选择在异国他乡工作,也可以和亲人朋友通过网络或电话保持联系,同时,人们可以在假期的时候回家探亲,因此,家庭关系和朋友关系不一定因为空间的隔离而疏远。

解析:undermine v 破坏

解析:estrange v疏远

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