见光死系列
With the development of society and economy， more and more children spend more and more time on computer playing more and more. Some people who are strongly against it think that it has negative effects on them both physically and mentally. In my opinion， I think that children should not play computer， they need choose other games.
Tpo名师讲解如何写好开头
这就是传说中的见光死开头!首段又臭又长，不是说不能写长，而是空有长度，没有内容，考官看完会直接傻掉。很多同学喜欢写with the development of society and economy 这样的开头，其实写过作文的人就知道，这是典型的中式思维模式在作怪。英国人的思维方式和我们不同，他们重视细节，讲究单刀直入，所以开头的废话连篇会直接让考官感到反感，恶心，进而影响整篇文章的分数。还有那个经典的more and more，重复太多明显缺乏词汇量。
下面是托福写作的优秀范文：
I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day. This is partly because sitting in front of a screen for too long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of a young child， regardless of what they are using the computer for.
这个开头就非常符合英国人的口味，不但开头没有任何废话和空洞的内容，相反，句子充满务实，具体的风格，而且，开头的最后一句话是对中间段落的一点提示，有过渡的作用。
上面就是tpo小站老师的归纳总结，希望考生们一定要善于总结，并把总结出的优势发挥到考生中去！
