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MPP/MPA专业简历

  XXXXXXXX

  School of Laws

  ShangHai XXXXXX XXXXXX, P.R. China

  TEL: +86 18XXXXXXXXX

  Email: XXXXXXXXXXXX@gmail.com

EDUCATION BACKGROUND
Sep 2009-June 2013 School of Law, xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, Shanghai, China

  Major: international politics

  Overall GPA: 3.62/4.0 Major GPA: 3.72/4.0

SCHOLORSHIP&HONORS
2009 Shanghai xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, third prize

  2010 Shanghai xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, third prize

  2010 上海大学生暑假社会实践活动 first prize

  2012 Shanghai xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, second prize

  钢琴7级 这个本来要写在certification里但没有这一项

STANDARDIZED TEST SCORES
GRE (November 2012) 304+ (V 144; Q 160)

  IELTS ( Oct 2012) 6.5(R 7.5; L 6.5; S 5.5; W 5.5)and expected 7 obtained in December,2012

EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIES
July 2012 Eco-Forum Global Volunteer

  Ø Provided visitors with information counseling services, to help handle with emergencies

  July 2011-Aug 2011 Summer Session Student, Chinese Cuture University, Taipei

  Ø Crisis management 95 organizational behavior 85

  Nov2011 Shanghai WGC-HSBC CHAMPIONS 2011 Volunteer

  Ø Preserve public order

  June 2010 上海大学生暑假实践活动

  Ø As leader of a team, improved together with teammates

  Ø Our team awarded first prize

WORK EXPERIENCE
July 2012-Aug 2012 Intern in Guiyang Branch of Industrial and Commercial Bank of China (ICBC) Ø making mortgage loans, including identifying the risks and doing the loan procedure

  11-12年寒暑假周末(这个我不知道要怎么写) 贵阳儿童福利院

  Taught child English


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  XXXXXXXX

  School of Laws

  ShangHai XXXXXX XXXXXX, P.R. China

  TEL: +86 18XXXXXXXXX

  Email: XXXXXXXXXXXX@gmail.com

EDUCATION BACKGROUND
Sep 2009-June 2013 School of Law, xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, Shanghai, China

  Major: international politics

  Overall GPA: 3.62/4.0 Major GPA: 3.72/4.0

SCHOLORSHIP&HONORS
(这里一块奖学金和得过的奖项我建议稍微往后点放,这里可以考虑放的是你的社会经历等等)2009 Shanghai xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, third prize

  2010 Shanghai xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, third prize

  2010 上海大学生暑假社会实践活动 first prize

  2012 Shanghai xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, second prize

  钢琴7级 这个本来要写在certification里但没有这一项

STANDARDIZED TEST SCORES
(没有必要写的这么详细,尤其是GPA比较高的同学,这一部分更加可以简单一些)GRE (November 2012) 304+ (V 144; Q 160)

  IELTS ( Oct 2012) 6.5(R 7.5; L 6.5; S 5.5; W 5.5)and expected 7 obtained in December,2012

EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIES
July 2012 Eco-Forum Global Volunteer(放后面)

  Ø Provided visitors with information counseling services, to help handle with emergencies

  July 2011-Aug 2011 Summer Session Student, Chinese Cuture University, Taipei

  Ø Crisis management 95 organizational behavior 85(建议放到前面的教育背景中去)

  Nov2011 Shanghai WGC-HSBC CHAMPIONS 2011 Volunteer

  Ø Preserve public order

  June 2010 上海大学生暑假实践活动

  Ø As leader of a team, improved together with teammates

  Ø Our team awarded first prize

WORK EXPERIENCE
July 2012-Aug 2012 Intern in Guiyang Branch of Industrial and Commercial Bank of China (ICBC) Ø making mortgage loans, including identifying the risks and doing the loan procedure (调理可以再清楚些,用1. makeing....2. identifying....3. ..... 的形式)

  11-12年寒暑假周末(这个我不知道要怎么写) 贵阳儿童福利院

  Taught child English(这部分其实跟你要申请的专业还是可以有关联的,所以可以考虑放到前面一些的地方,另外,这里的福利院内容可以有基础教学,帮助孩子做一些心理辅导等等)

RESEARCH EXPERIENCE
这个我没有。。。。。。(写的PAPER等都可以写进去的)

  点评:同学你的简历给我的感觉就是杂。看似活动很多,但是没有什么主干思想,比较散。所以你现在要做的就是将这些活动经历再一次归类,精简语句。让人感觉你就是应该去申请MPP这个专业

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