School of Laws
ShangHai XXXXXX XXXXXX, P.R. China
TEL: +86 18XXXXXXXXX
Email: XXXXXXXXXXXX@gmail.com
Major: international politics
Overall GPA: 3.62/4.0 Major GPA: 3.72/4.0
2010 Shanghai xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, third prize
2010 上海大学生暑假社会实践活动 first prize
2012 Shanghai xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, second prize
钢琴7级 这个本来要写在certification里但没有这一项
IELTS ( Oct 2012) 6.5(R 7.5; L 6.5; S 5.5; W 5.5)and expected 7 obtained in December,2012
Ø Provided visitors with information counseling services, to help handle with emergencies
July 2011-Aug 2011 Summer Session Student, Chinese Cuture University, Taipei
Ø Crisis management 95 organizational behavior 85
Nov2011 Shanghai WGC-HSBC CHAMPIONS 2011 Volunteer
Ø Preserve public order
June 2010 上海大学生暑假实践活动
Ø As leader of a team, improved together with teammates
Ø Our team awarded first prize
11-12年寒暑假周末(这个我不知道要怎么写) 贵阳儿童福利院
Taught child English
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School of Laws
ShangHai XXXXXX XXXXXX, P.R. China
TEL: +86 18XXXXXXXXX
Email: XXXXXXXXXXXX@gmail.com
Major: international politics
Overall GPA: 3.62/4.0 Major GPA: 3.72/4.0
2010 Shanghai xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, third prize
2010 上海大学生暑假社会实践活动 first prize
2012 Shanghai xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, second prize
钢琴7级 这个本来要写在certification里但没有这一项
IELTS ( Oct 2012) 6.5(R 7.5; L 6.5; S 5.5; W 5.5)and expected 7 obtained in December,2012
Ø Provided visitors with information counseling services, to help handle with emergencies
July 2011-Aug 2011 Summer Session Student, Chinese Cuture University, Taipei
Ø Crisis management 95 organizational behavior 85(建议放到前面的教育背景中去)
Nov2011 Shanghai WGC-HSBC CHAMPIONS 2011 Volunteer
Ø Preserve public order
June 2010 上海大学生暑假实践活动
Ø As leader of a team, improved together with teammates
Ø Our team awarded first prize
11-12年寒暑假周末(这个我不知道要怎么写) 贵阳儿童福利院
Taught child English(这部分其实跟你要申请的专业还是可以有关联的,所以可以考虑放到前面一些的地方,另外,这里的福利院内容可以有基础教学,帮助孩子做一些心理辅导等等)
点评:同学你的简历给我的感觉就是杂。看似活动很多,但是没有什么主干思想,比较散。所以你现在要做的就是将这些活动经历再一次归类,精简语句。让人感觉你就是应该去申请MPP这个专业